Argument 1: People are absorbed by the technology around them because they are not themselves anymore.
Argument 2: Digital media causes people to leave the real world and enter a place where they become motionless and become a new person.
Argument 3: Using these new digital devices it allows us to become socially challenged and give us an excuse to be lazy.
Evidence#1: Feed
- People are under control of the Feed and are no allowed to think for themselves.
Evidence#2: Wall-E
- People were so disfigured by the technology that when they were left alone they did not know how to fend themselves which cause them to have an unhealthy lifestyle.
Evidence#3: Video Project
- People were alienate themselves and did not know what they were doing causing them to be zombies.
Leah's
ReplyDeleteI thought your thesis was outstanding and really put everything we learned into a nut shell. Your outline is a good start but definitely be more elaborate in your paper and use evidence, and make sure to tie everything back. I think your paper will be interesting and you will bring up many good details about the unit.
leah,
ReplyDeleteyou have a very straight foward thesis which is pretty good. In order to have a strong paper, i think you need to have good evidence. once you find evidence, it will make your thesis even stronger. I think if you elaborate on your ideas about feed, it will be a very strong argument. you are off to a good start.