Steph
What is cool? There are so many different definitions its hard to be cool. Depending on your social map and the way your raised you cool is different from someone raised with a different sense of cool. Cool varies, depending where you come from and how you approach things. Its branches off into some many things to physical appearances and what we think mentally. Teenagers these days do whatever it takes to be in the "cool" crowd at the same time be "who they are".I believe the route of "cool" has become more and more competive. At the same time it starting at younger ages. Young teens nowadays are getting piercings like crazy trying to be "cool" but not looking long terms same thing goes for tattoos. Kids are just trying to fit in, its going to an extreme at the same time its like whatever. Like you said they are under pressure and do it just to fit in do they know when to stop though? Cool is corrupting young people these days.
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Matt
In society today young teens are surrounded by trying to be "cool" and being someone their not.
If you do not have the latest fashion they you are not considered cool. Even if you do not know what it is as long as you have it, you have that upperhand. Its like that video we saw "Merchants of Cool" and the girls are told to flaunt their sexuality even though they do not what is. This goes with the fashion statement. In order to be the part you have to act the part which is "cool".
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